Unforseen Consequences: Chapter 6

Archie

Posted 16 years ago2007-05-07 17:58:16 UTC Post #221326

UNFORSEEN CONSEQUENCES
Chapter 6: 'New Diggs'
Comic 21

Maps used:
cafe_rosana.bsp

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Chapter 1: 'The Fugitive'

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Chapter 2: 'Oil Hunt'

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Chapter 3: 'Rational Explanation'

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Chapter 4: 'In the Beginning'

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Chapter 5: 'Revenge'

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Chapter 6: 'New Diggs'

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Habboi

Posted 16 years ago2007-05-07 18:08:31 UTC Post #221333

Very nice. Bout time you worked on these again

HabboiSticky White Love Glue

Archie

Posted 16 years ago2007-05-07 18:21:31 UTC Post #221337

I just found out, through somebody I showed the latest one to that i did the first one in late 2005! December 10th at 2am.

If you look over the series, it's hillarious seeing the quality difference between then and now

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Rimrook

Posted 16 years ago2007-05-07 18:42:45 UTC Post #221341

Just the sight of Gman makes you consider doing a lot of things. lol.

RimrookSince 2003

monster_urby

Posted 16 years ago2007-05-07 18:50:48 UTC Post #221345

ITS BACK!

Makes me want to GMod my bad self again.

monster_urbyGoldsourcerer

Daubster

Posted 16 years ago2007-05-08 07:51:06 UTC Post #221383

Woot! It's continuated!
The camera angles could've been toggled a bit more, but anyways - nice job. ^^

DaubsterVault Dweller

Trapt

Posted 16 years ago2007-05-08 08:09:10 UTC Post #221384

Not funny and pretty lame tbh.

Traptlegend

Archie

Posted 16 years ago2007-05-08 08:10:11 UTC Post #221385

this one wasn't especially meant to be funny.. I was simply trying to set the story for the next few.

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kraken

Posted 16 years ago2007-05-08 08:11:16 UTC Post #221386

what the fux

kraken

Archie

Posted 16 years ago2007-07-01 19:08:24 UTC Post #227061

UNFORSEEN CONSEQUENCES
Chapter 6: 'New Diggs'
Comic 22
Norman has myspace now!

Maps used:
cafe_rosana.bsp

notes:
It's getting really difficult to move the story along and still include at least a little bit of humour. Oh well. once this story arc is over it should return to a more normal idea.

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Daubster

Posted 16 years ago2007-07-02 10:48:03 UTC Post #227145

The posing's pretty decent and you've definately improved in angles though it doesn't look like he's really running in the first frame. You could also add a few frames to the beginning, explaining how the character got shot.
Anyways - hope you get through the arc soon.

DaubsterVault Dweller

Archie

Posted 16 years ago2007-07-02 18:12:26 UTC Post #227204

You could also add a few frames to the beginning, explaining how the character got shot.

If unforseen consequences should have tought you anything, it's that i like doing flashbacks. =]

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Archie

Posted 16 years ago2007-07-03 11:58:10 UTC Post #227245

UNFORSEEN CONSEQUENCES
Chapter 6: 'New Diggs'
Comic 23
Norman has myspace now!

Maps used:
cafe_rosana.bsp
cafe_rosana_bewm.bsp

notes:

Star Wars references ftw. And in case it's difficult to tell, the two who say they love each other are NOT Norman and Rosana.. They're the couple who are shooting at the metrocops in panel 6.

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monster_urby

Posted 16 years ago2007-07-03 12:06:21 UTC Post #227246

Norman seems to have the same expression through the whole thing.

Work on running poses. Norman and Rosana look like they're sneaking out.

Big explosion could have been moar impressive by adding furniture and things in mid flight as well as a big explosion using the huge model in the 'effects' tab.

Otherwise 'MOAR PLEEZ!'

monster_urbyGoldsourcerer

Archie

Posted 16 years ago2007-07-03 12:08:37 UTC Post #227247

Norman seems to have the same expression through the whole thing.

shhh.

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Madcow

Posted 16 years ago2007-07-03 12:18:22 UTC Post #227249

I liked it, but you might need to put a bit more detail into every frame.

MadcowSpy zappin my udder

Daubster

Posted 16 years ago2007-07-04 11:42:17 UTC Post #227346

Norman seems to have the same expression through the whole thing.

At least he tried to hide that on the last 2 frames.

Posing needs moar work and as Urb said, the explosion could use some debris flying around.

MOAR PLIEZE?

DaubsterVault Dweller

Unforseen Consequences: Chapter 6 Created 16 years ago2007-05-07 17:58:16 UTC by Archie